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Why My Student Film Flopped: An Analysis 

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Christy T
Christy T 2 dias atrás
On the bright side, you got Jamie Robson.
Christy T
Christy T 2 dias atrás
Btw: I hated having to direct. The thought of doing it for a film is horrifying. All of my directors were either known for making actors cry or groping them. So, when I was in directing courses (even though all I wanted to do was costumes...what we do for a degree, right?), I ended up with student actors outside of the department who cried when they needed to do something as small as project to the back of the room. It was miserable.
Christy T
Christy T 2 dias atrás
Try a re-edit.
Christy T
Christy T 2 dias atrás
My city holds a film festival every year and will return to it after covid. We would totally add your film.
TD McCoy
TD McCoy 2 dias atrás
I liked the film 🤷
Constance Curtis
Constance Curtis 3 dias atrás
I feel like your short film was the predecessor to Lady Bird! The protagonists have similar personality traits and a similar mother-daughter dynamic, in addition to the cinematography style. Really great work
Κωνσταντίνος Α.
I saw it, it was quite sad, but there was some contemporary humour in it. :)
Eujineus
Eujineus 4 dias atrás
Что она ответила Элизе, когда сидела и глядела на картину?
MsLunabelly
MsLunabelly 19 dias atrás
I actually really enjoyed that. Would love to see a longer, fuller version, and I’d love to see Poppy triumph!
Sammy
Sammy 22 dias atrás
It is a beautiful piece to look at and I like the slow scenes - I can understand why you created that many. It is atmospheric and beautiful. If they would be part of a full length movie with lots of lively scenes in between and such it would have been great.
Marissa Bones
Marissa Bones 22 dias atrás
Nice that you did this
*_*
*_* 23 dias atrás
I actually really liked the film
Natasa Filipovic
Natasa Filipovic 25 dias atrás
For something made in such a short time, it’s quite good a pleasurable to watch. I can see a lot of talent and raw potential... The storyline is fabulous!
Sayler Phillips
Sayler Phillips 25 dias atrás
It would have been funny if after Poppy calls that woman a ‘fat whore’ (lmao by the way, totally caught me off guard and I laughed for like a whole minute) if the woman was the lady of the house and in the next shot Poppy’s sitting at the dinner table with like, a slap mark across her face and then it cuts to her mother just shaking her head. Also, I actually quite liked your film, and I saw what you were going for and what you were trying to convey.
Alexis Ericson
Alexis Ericson 29 dias atrás
When you said you heard the music in the film getting used in an online ad, I got an ad with the same music from the film
Miriam Gillham
Miriam Gillham 29 dias atrás
I have watched the film. Please consider making it again addressing all the issues that fall short that you identified. It has a certain whimsy coupled with a pathos that could make it a brilliant view point into a young women’s hopes of herself. It needs to be handled with your new found sense of timing, budgeting and genuine finesse. I find your BRdesk videos very witty and thought provoking. I think you may have it in you now to perfect this story. Good luck with it all from here. A true fan!
Helen P
Helen P Mês atrás
The cinematography is exceptional - re-edits would be BOMB
D. M. K.
D. M. K. Mês atrás
Acting You showed here was really good and I already like Poppy
Shadow 13_13
Shadow 13_13 Mês atrás
I'm no critic or anything, but I thoroughly enjoyed the film. I'd even rewatch it. For the amount of time presented it said what it needed to say and felt complete. Though I'm sure you know, just like with the first of anything it's never perfect. To be able to critic your own work shows growth in your craft/passion. The film was no "flop," but only the beginning of a journey. Just like Poppy's ending.
Anushka Nikhil
Anushka Nikhil Mês atrás
It definitely succeeded in being a period comedy! (The beetroot comment made us all laugh) I don't think you want the feedback anymore (but since you've used your degree, give me a chance to use mine in explaining what i think) So yes, it is a bit choppy and the pacing makes the plot seem like it has the hiccups, but, at the 4 minute mark, I wish there was a longer moment to take in all the possibilities. Because at that point, the story could have gone to so many different places. The fact that near the middle of the film, the audience truly does not know which way you're going to take the story is really great! It made me anticipate what direction you would take it! The problem in my opinion, is that my imagination took me to a more satisfying ending than the film did, which is a personal problem I'll admit. But actually, I did imagine that Poppy would take up art, she wanted to be one with the art, and to be a part of the process of creating the art would agree with her desires. What I personally think it lacked is a singular resonating message. She didn't grow with the narrative, she's exactly as naive in the end, as she was in the beginning. The "death" should have had signified a change in her. Something I noticed and (makes sense within the film) is that she does look stunning, like art, while she lives, moves, loves, and imagines, not when she consciously tries to embody art. If only she could've perhaps realised that art isn't just on paper, or in an artist's muse; that art is in everything, life itself is art (hers certainly looks it!) would have made an impact and given closure to her story. aight you didn't ask but I did this for my satisfaction because i really did enjoy the film actually, it made me laugh and think of all these things.. I relate heavily w Poppy help me gdghhgjjhfkj bye edit: I actually really liked the music choices, they strengthened the identity of the film as a comedy! But the transitions between them killed it a little... not very smooth. Also, narration.... nah. Most of the scenes didn't need it, I cringed at "that's my mom" lol
delete this
delete this Mês atrás
Just watched your short and I have some feedback (whether it helps or not): The cinematography at times is great and really shows the painterly quality you're going for. I think the actress is a good fit for the role & the idea behind the story could work quite well. My main gripes with the film are the voice-over (lose it, it doesn't tell us anything that we can't see on screen), the music (takes us out of the world), the pacing (this could easily be a six minute film), and the biggest one is the script. It's not a funny script. I think it could have done well as a heartfelt story about someone following their passion no matter what, but the lack of speed and absurdity makes this slow and at times a little cringe worthy. I know these are harsh words from some anonymous person on the internet, but they are meant with sincerity in the hopes that you get back into film making using the lessons you have learned. All the best.
Just Dandy
Just Dandy Mês atrás
It’s funny when I see things about pre-Raphaelite art because I worked at the museum with the largest pre-raph art collection outside of England so I saw a lot of these pieces every day for a few years.
Karolina Żebrowska
oh! where is it if I may ask?
The Patriotic Romper
This was so great for me. Studying film right now (while juggling historical costuming!) and this was the perfect marriage of the two for me. Thanks!
Antonella Calderón
i liked the film
Bianca Vilaverde
Bianca Vilaverde Mês atrás
I just feel it ended so fast, the end came so fast... I loved the short film, i would love to watch a bigger version xD
Isopropyl Disinfectant
I love this film, despite the flaws. -a short of actual wasted youth🌹
Emma Eriksson
Emma Eriksson Mês atrás
It’s a good filmidea tho!
Cerys Harries
Cerys Harries Mês atrás
And our meme mom strikes again
nostro lius
nostro lius Mês atrás
what's the song in 5:56!!!!!
crumberly
crumberly 2 meses atrás
all film students should examine why their movies are shit like this, maybe there would be more great student films then. kudos girl.
Kaitlyn Jones
Kaitlyn Jones 2 meses atrás
This looks like something we would have watched in my European cinema course.
Tamiris Hirata
Tamiris Hirata 2 meses atrás
Not gonna lie, I couldn't watch the whole movie. It's visually beautiful, but meh... It makes me wonder about all the bad things I'll see when I look at my own student movie in a few years.
David Payne
David Payne 2 meses atrás
I'm a recent graduate of a film school (FAMU); I agree with all of your points and I admire your self-reflection. Frankly, the film is not very good. It's bland, it didn't make me care. The fact that you can recognise this means that you've learned a lot through the process of making your film, which is important - I think that's the main benefit of creating student films. Like you said, an open ending in a story that's not very driven to begin with can hardly be satysfying, but pacing is definitely the biggest issue. You blame writing - rightfully so - but I still believe a lot could've been achieved in the edit. Cut the runtime in half and it would work a lot better: there's just not enough story to warrant 12 minutes. This wouldn't be the case if you were able to create a captivating atmosphere, but this is where you ran into other shortcomings - mainly the very mediocre cinematography and sound design. I'm sure it's mostly the lack of skilled crew and gear that's to blame, but anyway, it doesn't bring me back in time to another era; instead, it keeps reminding me that I'm watching "just" a student film. I'm impressed by the set&costume design, especially considering it's your own work. As for the poster-painting, I honestly think it's the least of this film's problems, I didn't even notice it. The choice of music really is quite insulting - it's the "fake edginess" you're talking about which is only there on surface, it is not really incorporated into the narrative or the directing. Especially when you gave up on the quirky music midway through the film, it begs the question why it's there in the first place. Anyway, I hope it wasn't your last project! Making mistakes is a part of the process, as is embracing them and learning from them. On a positive note, the cast was pretty good, which means you have a good eye for actors and that you have talent in directing them - in a director, nothing is more important than that. Good luck with whatever you create next!
Ellery Hall
Ellery Hall 2 meses atrás
as a film student currently, this is very helpful and honestly more specific than some of my professors have been!! thank you for breaking down the problems you encountered and providing ways to solve them!
valeria vereshtshagina
valeria vereshtshagina 2 meses atrás
actually, i really loved it :) i love your long pauses, music (that doesnt really go with the film!) and everything
Elise Clark-Johnson
Elise Clark-Johnson 2 meses atrás
I have been a professional working in the film industry for 6+ years. What you accomplished was very good for what you had to work with. I think your analysis was interesting and shows a great deal of objectivity on your part, which a lot of young directors do not have. The humor landed, which IMO is the hardest bit to do. As far technically issues that could have been handled differently... you mention pacing. As I am sure you know a few seconds off a scene can effect everything. The first moment it felt too slow was when the mom was serving herself food, and the following mother scenes. It started to feel like it was making more fun of the mom that the situation. The second scene was when the painter felt uncomfortable, got up and left. I think it would of been a nice rift if he also threw her and her belongings on the curb similar to the madam. The product might work in a feature but not a 12 min short. As far as the painting, yes, since it was a hero painting it would have been ideal to print on canvas. BUT it could have been less obvious if when transported if was rolled, not folded (which it obviously was), printed on matte paper, or sprayed with a matte clear spray paint. OR it could have even been less obvious if the light had be diffused more. Anyways, I am glad you are able to rewatch, learn...and glad you have done so well on youtube!
Karina Venegas
Karina Venegas 2 meses atrás
I didn't like it but it's not bad. This is mainly because the actors, dresses and scenes are great. As a general period drama I find it akward but ok yet is pretty ordinary. However, when I consider that it was aimed as comedy, I can totally see why it flopped. There are very few funny moments, mainly bad executed. On the other hand it feels rushed and not connected. Multiple scenes are presented, you now one influences another, yet the obvious conection is lacking. I feel like no scene has a clousure or direction. She saw the man in the woods, then posses for him... How did she contacted him again? The "whore" was her boss? Also, for comedy angles can make ir or break it, specially when the time period is usually seen as serious, a different angle would have made it stand out. And the central comedy momment was the one were she became a muse, which also feels really rushed and lacks importance.
Saber Cyan
Saber Cyan 2 meses atrás
I WANT A NICER ENDING WHERE SHE SUCCEEDS ;___;
Darina Rib
Darina Rib 2 meses atrás
Wow, I actually loved your movie a lot! And felt Poppy very well))
jhon hoppins
jhon hoppins 2 meses atrás
I don't know much about directing, but right away it felt like a home film because the camera angles weren't very creative. There's a scene in the starting where she's just standing doing nothing and we're not sure what she's thinking. Sometimes when she's walking the camera is shaky and placed too high up instead of where it should be on the actress. There was an eating scene where you could have shown a close up of the stew so we get a better idea of how poor they are and what they can afford. Also the "and then I died" scene should have started with her tripping on something on the way out to feed the chickens and then cut to the "funeral".
Gamdursol
Gamdursol 2 meses atrás
I haven’t watched the film, but I agree with you that it looks stunning.
Sophia Redwood
Sophia Redwood 2 meses atrás
I know next to nothing about filmmaking and don’t watch movies often, but what wildly catches my eye here is your ability to grow and learn from your creative experience. I’m an aspiring writer and my own stumbling block is often fear of not knowing enough or fear of failure, so I spend years developing ideas but never write. The fact that you brought yourself out, made a short film, poured so much of your energy and heart into it, and then was able to look back at it later and learn from that experience? That’s what makes me so, so impressed. It’s something I could never do; I have great ideas that I know will be imperfect when I first work with them, so I leave them in my head where they look better. Even when I do want to start writing, I have the fear in the pit of my stomach that there’s going to be so much wrong with my writing, and so I get caught in a Catch 22 since my inexperience with writing makes me terrified to write all the time. I’ve been reading books all my life and getting straight As in English, and I always ace the English sections of all kinds of testings with flying colors, but I literally cannot just bring myself to devote time to my craft of writing because I have too much head knowledge (which definitely has more blanks than I know it does) and not enough experience. What’s worse: I know ALL OF THIS about myself, and yet it’s still so hard to work hard and fix it. Anyway, this turned into a bit of a rant, but I seriously LOVE your ability to work hard, critique yourself, and get better. It’s something I need, and it’s so special to be able to see.
Jordan Link
Jordan Link 2 meses atrás
try again and crowdfund. i'd pitch in
ʞzʇ
ʞzʇ 2 meses atrás
23/10/2
LifeLikeSage
LifeLikeSage 3 meses atrás
I am simple man, I see redhead thumbnail, I click.
Evan Duty
Evan Duty 3 meses atrás
"I paying people back" nice
Brigita Širlová
Brigita Širlová 3 meses atrás
Haha the struggle is real! I am in aw still, that you got it done! I have made animated bachelor film and when I look back at it it I can relate to all you said.
Mephistopheles
Mephistopheles 3 meses atrás
I admire your ability to criticize your work without feeling the need to include a "feel good" message about "doing your best" and society. It's the type of maturity that I don't see often.
Walenta
Walenta 3 meses atrás
I legitimately did not come to this channel expecting to learn more about filmmaking, so this was an absolutely pleasant surprise Edit: I know that a) I am in absolutely no position to give advice to someone who has graduated film school and b) you’ll never see this, but I feel like it’s interesting to note: I come from a writing background (nothing big, just some classes and some personal projects that I’m rather proud of), and I feel like I always hear film people using “show, don’t tell” to mean “don’t convey through dialogue what you could otherwise convey visually.” This is probably important for stuff like small scale exposition (e.g., “The warden keeps the key on his belt” vs a shot of the warden attaching the key to his belt), but when you start getting into information that relates to the characters’ internal states or how they relate to the world around them, dialogue becomes less of a crutch and more of a tool. Speaking of tools, I realize I have probably begun to sound like one. Thank you for coming to my TED talk.
Malayka Toure
Malayka Toure 3 meses atrás
the short film is great
Qwadro Goggles
Qwadro Goggles 3 meses atrás
мне нужны субтитры(
Larry Scott
Larry Scott 3 meses atrás
I made the mistake of watching this self-criticism before watching the film. All your own criticism is rubbish. I really liked the film. It’s 12 minutes. You covered a lot of ground, and I thought you did present the reality of her situation, and that she still looked forward to her future. It’s has a touch of Woody Allen, and it’s charming. A couple of things. The scene that I didn’t care for was when she sat for the portrait. Remake that one scene. And the ending scene: She should’ve had charcoal and sketch pad, and a half descent sketch. Falling off her stool, priceless.
afeera adil
afeera adil 3 meses atrás
Idk but I think the idea of the movie was great and so you should probably do it again. It'd be great.
mihiec
mihiec 3 meses atrás
Witaj. Obejrzałem film i uważam że jest genialny. Nie odebrałem go jako kemedi lecz jako dramat. Te przerwy i cisza powielały naiwność dziewczyny a także jej odwagę. Nie poddawaj się.
neilorourke71
neilorourke71 3 meses atrás
keep going, and make sure you LEARN LEARN LEARN something from every failure
Jenn Hoff
Jenn Hoff 3 meses atrás
I think the 2nd line in the film is KILLER and should be the first line. The first line doesn't really need the "I believe" part. But the 2nd line is so good! Anyway, I'm impressed with how open and comfortable you are talking about something you made that wasn't successful. Usually we/people like to sweep those sorts of embarrassments under the rug. But making a video and saying, "I realized that while I showed the film to all of my friends, none of them gave me feedback other than 'wow, the location looks great' or 'are you making a sequel- haha.' " is GUTSY! I'm way more impressed with you doing this than I probably would be from a good student film. You rock!
Shung Qi
Shung Qi 3 meses atrás
I have seen a pattern of 3 sort-of laws in telling stories in movie form: Do not skimp on audio; it is more than half of the experience. Do not skimp on screenwriting; it is the substance that makes the audience core desire to follow the movie Do not skimp on production design; the location can be thought of as an actual part of the characters lives, and it should matter. From the small snippets I experienced from this video, sound and screenwriting would’ve needed proofreading, if it was possible in the schedule. I don’t know your situation with that though, because it was important to keep in mind that you were a student! And, you had to factor in time before festival due dates, and obvious budgeting that involved trying to balance compromising and (creative) problem solving. That, and I’m not a serious filmmaker (yet), I don’t know jack about the true process. Honestly, I really do admire the process of making this film, as you and your crew really did seem to be creative and dedicated with solving many sorts of problems, even if you perhaps overlooked some. I’m proud of people like you that bother to acknowledge those shortcomings much later even. Thank you so much for sharing this experience, as it really does help aspiring other people who want to dip/dive into narrative movies. I’m curious to know your experiences with the crew that helped keep everything together.
LittleMissAlice
LittleMissAlice 3 meses atrás
Actually, I think it's just in the script. We don't get a solid answer for how this situation turns out, so we're left with only an immediate sense of impending doom. Which, though it be spot-on for life as it is, is not how we do things in film, of course. The film is beautiful in every other way. It just...doesn't quite seem to have an ending? The only other thing I'd change about this beautiful piece would be adding a stabilizer effect in post to some of the shots in the beginning.
theo_bccs
theo_bccs 3 meses atrás
your film was great though 😌
Erin Smith
Erin Smith 3 meses atrás
I would love to see your vision come to life! A remake would be well received from this crowd, at least. I'm sure of it. Your lead actress Poppy, is incredibly expressive. Your entire cast was awesome. I bet an additional few members would have helped the pacing and energy, like you predicted. She is perfect for the fantasy shots. I loved the bits we got to see. And love the premise of your work. It would be so wonderful to really watch your full dream after your own critical edits.
M 3
M 3 3 meses atrás
I love how honestly you critiqued your own work. What you did sample looks like it could be a really great idea, given budget and critical input along the way.
Zayalla Fantasy
Zayalla Fantasy 3 meses atrás
I would love to see you reshoot the film and make a video where you compare the two version😁
Kellen Johnson
Kellen Johnson 3 meses atrás
I still enjoyed it, you should keep making films if you’re so inclined! I’d watch them. I’d love to hear you review other films and talk about what worked.
Julie's Tales
Julie's Tales 3 meses atrás
I think if your tutors didn't point at those things, they fail as tutors. What's the point of their job? Your friends could tell you (and they did) the same....
Alice
Alice 3 meses atrás
From the few scenes you have includerd here I think one positive thing is also the photography, the way the single framing is "composed"!! And the idea is really interesting.. now you have more experience for your next film 😃💪🎥🎬
kombuchaspit
kombuchaspit 3 meses atrás
keep going! i think you will be a great director one day
2am anon
2am anon 3 meses atrás
directing, producing, making a script, editing AND shooting a video were the things that i did back when i was in 8th grade. the actors were shi*, and it took us about 20+ takes on a single film. it was for a school project and well, despite the hardwork and a bit of creativity it also didnt end up well. i really understood what you've done through though, and it kinda pains me. anyway i hope u do well next time :D
Michelle w.
Michelle w. 4 meses atrás
Good concept. Maybe a storyboard, an introduction by film music to showcase its a parody. I thought also about the rule: Show, don‘t tell. With a little more tweaking you could change the movie to something you have imagined. ❤️
Ophelia Closer
Ophelia Closer 4 meses atrás
I just watched the film and here's my opinion: It started out very promising, I was curious what the story would be and what the characters are going to do. The scenery is beautiful, the characters and the art in the shots are interesting and very easy on the eyes. It's true that the long and slow scenes were in fact too long and kinda swept away the attention a little bit. Here and there you could see hints to topics you wanted to cover but they lacked in depth. In general I didn't understand where this was going and was indeed disappointed with the open ending. Also, I didn't feel a lot which is immensely important for short films. However, as you said yourself, there is a real potential here. Maybe if the story had focused more in depth on one aspect of the problems of the character and life in the 18th century it would've been easier to feel with it and follow along. The cinematography is beautiful. And lastly, most importantly, after watching your videos on BRdesk, I can see you in this film. It has your spirit, not really sure how to describe it. Most comes down to the specific kind of humour portrayed in it which is very specific to you as a person and creator I think. Regarding that you said this was what you wanted to portray, I think this really shows and you've done an amazing job here which makes this film unique as your film. More time and more budget could've immensely helped the film I think. Me and I think a lot of others would be intrigued to see other projects of yours which aren't made under time and financial pressure.
Rebecca Walters
Rebecca Walters 4 meses atrás
I’d love a movie in all her awkward glory!
Hal Moore
Hal Moore 4 meses atrás
You should allow auto-generated captions
GreenBeetle
GreenBeetle 4 meses atrás
Why you dont try to rewrite it and make a easy to remember title. Just try again i think you idea is so good just make a patronor kikstarter wherever is called to people to finance you project.
Genevieve Stunkard
Genevieve Stunkard 4 meses atrás
I went to the description to find the video link, saw “my nudes,” hesitated in confusion, clicked, and wow, you look gorgeous!!
WomanChild
WomanChild 4 meses atrás
I didn’t realise you studied in Edinburgh. Makes loadsa sense why I always thought sometimes when you speak you sound a little Scottish and then I wondered if I was just hearing that cause it’s familiar to me 😂 so that solves that mystery hahah. Ps I’d absolutely watch this film if you remade it fixing it for the issues you have with the original cause I love the concept and I for one agree re the music - playing it with what you wanted it to sound like made the biggest difference!!
Nichcool
Nichcool 4 meses atrás
Honestly, pacing is the thing i struggle with the most. I've made 3 short films so far, one was a catastrophe that I do not talk about, the second felt very artificial because i basically cut it to shreds, and the third felt kind of...empty, like you described your subsequent long shots.
Robbie Paterson
Robbie Paterson 4 meses atrás
What uni were you doing your Masters at?
Lykke Marie
Lykke Marie 4 meses atrás
I think the moment you added 'it's man world' over that fantasy scene, it had SO much more power and force to it. The Music really could've catapulted the idea much further.
Liz W
Liz W 4 meses atrás
I actually really loved it. I watch a lot of foreign films, so I'm used to long silences and little dialogue and they don't bother me. People don't talk constantly in real life. I can see everything you critiqued as being valid, but I still really loved it.
Sabrina Cooper
Sabrina Cooper 4 meses atrás
I think it's cute and full of potential! Even if it wasn't what you hoped for, it has it's charms.
Anna Louise
Anna Louise 4 meses atrás
It looks stunning if anything . ♥️
Turbonilla
Turbonilla 4 meses atrás
Honestly, I liked the film quite entirely, I only hated immediately the poster instead of a painting: it sets everything really off, because it's so fake... Same with the painting canvas at the end, even if maybe it is like that on purpose. But I didn't see so many problems in the rhythm or in the lines! I like long shots, silence, non verbal humor. It's a good film to me
mercurychild00
mercurychild00 4 meses atrás
Perhaps it could be that you didn´t research enough about scotland´s history, assuming that the film story is actually set there, and got some things wrong assuming that victorian era developed the same everywhere
Laura Athena
Laura Athena 4 meses atrás
Your cinematography, set dressing and costuming is professional level. But your points about the script and pacing make a lot of sense.
Giulia's Crafts
Giulia's Crafts 4 meses atrás
I think the scenes are really well done. The details are gorgeous, as are the costumes and the actors!!! I'd be curious to see the version with the music you would have liked to put. Music really improves the perception of situations! It would be great if you tried to edit the film with the music you wanted!!!
Eric Vosburg
Eric Vosburg 4 meses atrás
I just want to say that I just watched your film and actually really love it! The acting was so wonderful, the cinematography looked so brilliant and very professional! I also loved how the filmed protrade the main character as an incredibly relatable person. She felt really modern in a way that I felt like I already knew her, which is so refreshing for period films. I think you did such a brilliant job!
Christie Ricardo
Christie Ricardo 4 meses atrás
I hope you revisit this someday because I'd really like to see this story play out in a longer film.
cjk 31173
cjk 31173 4 meses atrás
love your edit
cjk 31173
cjk 31173 4 meses atrás
please dont try to do the same ol
cjk 31173
cjk 31173 4 meses atrás
Hey your ok 8)
cjk 31173
cjk 31173 4 meses atrás
Hey ok 8)
anne dla
anne dla 4 meses atrás
This looks BEAUTIFUL! 😍 still havent saw the whole product yet but still 💓 I feel like it would improve even more with the same actors and production because all of you probably grew up over time and now are able to look into a wider perspective and you already know which elements work and didnt and parts that need a little bit more of updated editing or just a little bit if improvement over all since you are looking into it now after 3 years. 😍😍😍
sead will
sead will 4 meses atrás
I'm going to go watch it! Honestly the clips look funny! Plus I love the idea of the story!
Kailey Cashen
Kailey Cashen 4 meses atrás
I would honestly love to see you remake this, it’s such a cool concept and was beautiful
A. Pseudonym
A. Pseudonym 4 meses atrás
scorsese's first films were trash. so were de palma's. we can't all be agnes varda. if you get the change to do so again, please make another film. you have obvious talent, you simply need to develop your own voice and develop more artistic intuition. the more you do it, the better you will get. we need more female directors.
A. Pseudonym
A. Pseudonym 4 meses atrás
oh damn, the cinematography and set design really is gorgeous
NerdilyDone
NerdilyDone 5 meses atrás
I adore the premise of your story.
dani c
dani c 5 meses atrás
Also i really love the idea of a comedy type period film with 60s/70s music that would be DOPE!
dani c
dani c 5 meses atrás
I can see and feel some of your criticisms, but when I first saw it I was legit amazed! I thought the production value was so good it really looked professional/historical and beautiful, and the other thing that i thought was exceptional were the actors, they did so so well, like better than at least 50% of movies that have huge budgets and go to theater honestly. So i just wanted you to know that at least those parts of your film really were exceptionally good.
Sarah Annette ෆ 「shysvnflower」
I wish Netflix would hit you up about making this into a short series or something. I adore the concept. T_T
Nettles Tea
Nettles Tea 5 meses atrás
Some Victorian popular music (at least in America) is funny. You could hire some session musicians to do Ta-ra-ra-BOOM-de-ay. It's 1890s tho.
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